Mona, has been ass over tea kettle busy the past few weeks. Dutiful as always she has continued to lead us down the path of enlightenment freeing us from the shackles of creative oppression. When I last checked the blog of our fearless leader, she had not yet posted a topic, so I will bravely proceed independently in her honor.
I’ve chosen hand. I’m fascinated by hands, their shape, their calluses, their scars. They tell stories with accuracy words fail to convey. Grab your mate’s (or a really understanding coworker’s) hand and take look. What do you see? Kitchen knife mishap, nice manicure, strength, delicacy…

Character is deeper,
Than the lines etched on your face;
The furrow of your brow;
The flare of your nostrils.
Show me the dangling appendages.
Those with which you grasp physically,
Intellectually, Individually.
Those tactile sensors of texture.
I want to see your hand;
Experience your map of the world;
Trace the joints of your slender fingers.
If you will not bare your soul;
I will hunt for it, along the life line,
Until I reach the scar below your index finger,
Faded with age.
Tickling your palm with the tips,
Dragging my thumb across.
Worn knuckles;
Battered and bruised.
The tools of a fighter.
But you are a faker;
Not a breaker of wills.

Challenge: Post a picture of your hands to your web page. Show me a glimpse of your soul. Lewd gestures optional.


June 8, 2007 at 12:44 pm |
Excellent hand drawing! I love hands as well and are usually one of the first things I notice about a person. When I fill out those stupid meme’s and they ask “what do you notice about the opposite sex” I want to say hands, but resort to writing ass because I just don’t think anyone would understand why I notice their hands. But men with manly hands? A must.
June 8, 2007 at 2:47 pm |
Ooh I love the challenge. I will see what I can do for this by Monday!
June 8, 2007 at 2:48 pm |
Oh yeah, duh. I wanted to tell you how much I loved the poem. Especially the part about hunting for her soul along her lifeline.
June 8, 2007 at 4:31 pm |
I will do so as well, probably later today. I have two different sized hands because of a severe cut when i was 11. I wonder which hand i should use?
I too like your poem, especially the last stanza.
June 8, 2007 at 6:09 pm |
You have such a way with words! If my hands were attached to a capable brain, and said brain could figure out how to post a damn picture of my hands…I would be more than happy to. I will endeavor to be successful after I take a much needed nap…that would be a catnap to you.
June 8, 2007 at 6:21 pm |
Amanda, thanks. I tend to check out everyone’s hands; men, women, children. You can check out hands without drawing attention to yourself, not like breasts or butts, if you like those,EVERYONE notices. Manly hands are nice, and very interesting to draw.
Maggie, I knew I could count on you.
Maggie, back so soon? Thank you. We have to look closely to find out who people really are, I guess it’s the same about discovering self too.
meno, no need to be stingy. Show both. Thank you…it’s all true.
June 8, 2007 at 7:40 pm |
There’s no way in hell I’m not sending you a shot of my hand. Your so awesome Patches. Stay tuned.
June 8, 2007 at 8:40 pm |
Lynn, Hmm I must of have missed you earlier. This is useful if you Really want to know how to post pics. No pressure…or nuthin’. Enjoy your snooze. You’ve earned one, after this week.
c’mon egan, I’m not some sort of four legged pervert…at least I don’t think so….okay maybe just a wee one.
June 8, 2007 at 9:06 pm |
Thanks for the information. Now I have no excuse. Off to a Friday night picnic…Will try to post my hand picture this weekend
June 9, 2007 at 1:51 am |
kitchen…knife…accident… *shaking head* Wow. Close, but no cigar. It happened to O on Thursday though, in the kitchen with a pocket knife. And it was Col. Mustard. (Sorry; had to throw that in).
I LOVE the third verse. Absolutely love it. But, I think I might drop the second. It doesn’t move us along. And the first line of the second verse… well, ok, I’m a pervert.
And the hand drawings make me drool with envy.
June 9, 2007 at 8:06 am |
Nancy, Col. Mustard can be such a bastard when his blood sugar drops too low. That second stanza does read like it belongs in an entirely different poem….the dangers of creating extemporaneous poetry in a an hour or two : ).
June 9, 2007 at 8:33 am |
Mine are up.
June 9, 2007 at 9:57 am |
De, I’m going to check them out, now.
June 9, 2007 at 10:33 am |
Your poetry and art work are always inspiring. My hands, however, are anything but inspiring these days (age spots, wrinkles, arthritis) so I hope you’ll forgive me if I keep them in my pockets.
June 9, 2007 at 11:51 am |
Joan, its all about comfort levels, not forgiveness. The interesting thing about hands is they tell the stories of ourselves, that we don’t often think to share.
June 10, 2007 at 1:20 am |
I found out about this project from Meno’s blog. Mine are up.
Peace,
~Chani
June 10, 2007 at 8:57 am |
Chani, thank you for visiting. I going to your place to peak.
June 10, 2007 at 4:01 pm |
I cannot resist, i tried, but i cannot. I hope that you did peak at chani’s place while you were peeking.
June 10, 2007 at 8:03 pm |
meno, well shit! Spell check can save from errors, but it cannot deliver me from the bowels of proof reading or the dangers of homonyms…
June 11, 2007 at 1:15 pm |
i love hands! i love that i found this post. and i love the poem.
June 11, 2007 at 2:12 pm |
brookem, thanks for visiting. Hands are very expressive, I’m overwhelmed by the responses to this post.