Poetry Friday: Hand

Mona, has been ass over tea kettle busy the past few weeks. Dutiful as always she has continued to lead us down the path of enlightenment freeing us from the shackles of creative oppression. When I last checked the blog of our fearless leader, she had not yet posted a topic, so I will bravely proceed independently in her honor.

I’ve chosen hand. I’m fascinated by hands, their shape, their calluses, their scars. They tell stories with accuracy words fail to convey. Grab your mate’s (or a really understanding coworker’s) hand and take look. What do you see? Kitchen knife mishap, nice manicure, strength, delicacy…


Character is deeper,
Than the lines etched on your face;
The furrow of your brow;
The flare of your nostrils.

Show me the dangling appendages.
Those with which you grasp physically,
Intellectually, Individually.
Those tactile sensors of texture.

I want to see your hand;
Experience your map of the world;
Trace the joints of your slender fingers.
If you will not bare your soul;
I will hunt for it, along the life line,
Until I reach the scar below your index finger,
Faded with age.

Tickling your palm with the tips,
Dragging my thumb across.
Worn knuckles;
Battered and bruised.
The tools of a fighter.
But you are a faker;
Not a breaker of wills.

Challenge: Post a picture of your hands to your web page. Show me a glimpse of your soul. Lewd gestures optional.

21 Responses to “Poetry Friday: Hand”

  1. Amanda Says:

    Excellent hand drawing! I love hands as well and are usually one of the first things I notice about a person. When I fill out those stupid meme’s and they ask “what do you notice about the opposite sex” I want to say hands, but resort to writing ass because I just don’t think anyone would understand why I notice their hands. But men with manly hands? A must.

  2. Maggie Says:

    Ooh I love the challenge. I will see what I can do for this by Monday!

  3. Maggie Says:

    Oh yeah, duh. I wanted to tell you how much I loved the poem. Especially the part about hunting for her soul along her lifeline.

  4. meno Says:

    I will do so as well, probably later today. I have two different sized hands because of a severe cut when i was 11. I wonder which hand i should use?

    I too like your poem, especially the last stanza.

  5. Lynn Says:

    You have such a way with words! If my hands were attached to a capable brain, and said brain could figure out how to post a damn picture of my hands…I would be more than happy to. I will endeavor to be successful after I take a much needed nap…that would be a catnap to you.

  6. patches Says:

    Amanda, thanks. I tend to check out everyone’s hands; men, women, children. You can check out hands without drawing attention to yourself, not like breasts or butts, if you like those,EVERYONE notices. Manly hands are nice, and very interesting to draw.

    Maggie, I knew I could count on you.

    Maggie, back so soon? Thank you. We have to look closely to find out who people really are, I guess it’s the same about discovering self too.

    meno, no need to be stingy. Show both. Thank you…it’s all true.

  7. egan Says:

    There’s no way in hell I’m not sending you a shot of my hand. Your so awesome Patches. Stay tuned.

  8. patches Says:

    Lynn, Hmm I must of have missed you earlier. This is useful if you Really want to know how to post pics. No pressure…or nuthin’. Enjoy your snooze. You’ve earned one, after this week.

    c’mon egan, I’m not some sort of four legged pervert…at least I don’t think so….okay maybe just a wee one.

  9. Lynn Says:

    Thanks for the information. Now I have no excuse. Off to a Friday night picnic…Will try to post my hand picture this weekend

  10. Nancy_Dancehall Says:

    kitchen…knife…accident… *shaking head* Wow. Close, but no cigar. It happened to O on Thursday though, in the kitchen with a pocket knife. And it was Col. Mustard. (Sorry; had to throw that in).

    I LOVE the third verse. Absolutely love it. But, I think I might drop the second. It doesn’t move us along. And the first line of the second verse… well, ok, I’m a pervert.

    And the hand drawings make me drool with envy. :-)

  11. patches Says:

    Nancy, Col. Mustard can be such a bastard when his blood sugar drops too low. That second stanza does read like it belongs in an entirely different poem….the dangers of creating extemporaneous poetry in a an hour or two : ).

  12. soberbriquette Says:

    Mine are up.

  13. patches Says:

    De, I’m going to check them out, now.

  14. Joan Says:

    Your poetry and art work are always inspiring. My hands, however, are anything but inspiring these days (age spots, wrinkles, arthritis) so I hope you’ll forgive me if I keep them in my pockets.

  15. patches Says:

    Joan, its all about comfort levels, not forgiveness. The interesting thing about hands is they tell the stories of ourselves, that we don’t often think to share.

  16. Chani Says:

    I found out about this project from Meno’s blog. Mine are up. :)

    Peace,

    ~Chani

  17. patches Says:

    Chani, thank you for visiting. I going to your place to peak.

  18. meno Says:

    I cannot resist, i tried, but i cannot. I hope that you did peak at chani’s place while you were peeking.

  19. patches Says:

    meno, well shit! Spell check can save from errors, but it cannot deliver me from the bowels of proof reading or the dangers of homonyms…

  20. brookem Says:

    i love hands! i love that i found this post. and i love the poem.

  21. patches Says:

    brookem, thanks for visiting. Hands are very expressive, I’m overwhelmed by the responses to this post.

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